My comment for my peer’s essay:

Your paper has a really good start to it. I loved your connection to your podcast and how you worked it into your essay and connected it to your claim. The only things you would need to work on are just putting your thesis into your intro paragraph, expanding your paragraphs to create more depth and to use both of the other essays. When you’re working with other essays, you just need to remember to introduce them with a short summary so the reader knows what the essay was briefly about. Overall, I think it was a good start to your essay.