Learning Outcome 1 (Showcase)

Example of a Free Draft https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AqTaBOlpWc2TsExhG04mGDe5MuMSaSMIrXfbO8SLPIs/edit?usp=sharing

Example of a Final Draft s://docs.google.com/document/d/1AqTaBOlpWc2TsExhG04mGDe5MuMSaSMIrXfbO8SLPIs/edit?usp=sharing

I made significant changes between my first and final draft of these essays by starting with making sure I knew what I wanted to talk about and that it was flowing in the right direction. After I was set on the flow, I made sure that I was covering all the areas needed for the essay prompt. Once I had all the fundamentals down, I went back and added extra details such as grammar, word choice and just anything else I thought it needed.

In the beginning, I didn’t make that many changes. I mostly stuck to quick changes, like making sure everything was answered and my grammar was all correct. Now, I take my time and make sure that the paper really is the way I want it to be.

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